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Icy Wind Floats Through a Broken Window
Contributed by
Jukki
on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 11:22:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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See that old chair
Crouched in the corner, so silent and still?
See it sadly sag under the weight of the air.
Tattered, scratched, old.
Remember.
Dare you ever sit on it?
Reveal the cold memories
These haunted walls cannot speak for fear.
Pain, misery, tears.
Weep.
Are you happy
now I've finally gone
to a far and distant place?
"Yes, no, maybe."
Regret.
Do you recollect me at all?
Cold, bland English summers spent in harmony,
On the beach of human desires.
Remember. Weep. Regret.
See.
You're not as happy
As they think you are.
Copyright ©
Jukki
... [
2005-11-19 11:22:27]
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Re: Icy Wind Floats Through a Broken Window
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by Ari on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 12:10:57 PM AEST
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Great style of writing. I like the stanzas come together at the end and then you end it with a very poignant line.
Good write, job well done.
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Re: Icy Wind Floats Through a Broken Window
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by Skye on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 03:12:46 PM AEST
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| Wow! This is an amazing piece of poetry. I love how you end it. Definitely keep up the good work! |
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