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New arrival
Contributed by
lillyjane
on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 08:41:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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I close my eye's to stop the light,
no one here's my cry's,
I see some shadow's and some, shape's
floating near my eye's,
My body tremble's full of fear,
where am I, why am I here?
I hear raised voice's, people laughing,
I dont know where I am,
there talking in a language, I dont understand.
I feel some arm's and I feel safe,
my life has just begun,
I open up my screwed up eye's,
to look at my new mum..
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lillyjane
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2005-11-19 08:41:24]
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Re: New arrival
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 08:56:45 PM AEST
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| Lillyjane can breach any subject with her poetry and still have the abillity to tell a whole story in a few sentences. Well done Lillyjane long may you grace us with your muses. |
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Re: New arrival
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by Manda2 on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 12:23:42 PM AEST
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| You're very talented Lillyjane. |
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Re: New arrival
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by maestar on
Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 06:52:41 AM AEST
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| lovely, I never thought about it that way, very good |
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