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Light
Contributed by
Fernanda_F_Rocha
on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 05:12:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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In this mind
Disrobed of pressures
Dance infinite insinuations
To the savour of a soft melody
In this sweet and calm peace
It is recreated, in a placid smile
Of those deep eyes
A discreet penetrate
Of a intense light
In this want of anything want
There is a paganise of emotions
There is a to undressed of senses
There is a mute protest to the passions
There is a to silence the silence
There is only light..
By Fernanda F. Rocha©
Copyright ©
Fernanda_F_Rocha
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2005-11-19 05:12:53]
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Re: Light
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by eternal_sorrows on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 11:16:24 PM AEST
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Very well written. I love your imagery and the way you perfectly word this piece.
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Re: Light
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 04:21:52 AM AEST
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| Thank You :) |
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Re: Light
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by enigma on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 06:47:43 PM AEST
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Fernanda,
I certainly hope I don't annoy you...I think I Love you...I know...crazy...I must be kidding...kind of...don't squirm...I mean, I simply Love your poetry...you are your poetry, so, I must Love you...this cyber-stuff is really weird...
Okay...okay...I'm back down to earth...how do you know so much...so, so much...you are Portuguese, yet you know just the right English word to slip in here and then to ever so delicately slide this ingeniously perfect English word into this little space over here...I am ashamed to only know one tongue and to have to use such huge amounts of cerebrial matter to create my heavy poetic creations...you are awesme...simply awesome...
...There is only light..
...yes......................................yes.....................................oh, most undeniably, yes........
...........................There.................is..............only.....................light...
...where do you come up with this stuff???
...okay...okay...alpha hummmmmm...very nice...very, very nice...
...I'll shut up now...
...before I go, I must thank you...
Thank you, Fernanda...thank you...
ron...enigma |
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Re: Light
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by Kittenfantastico on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 07:51:24 PM AEST
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| wow very nice |
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