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Paper Cup Girl
Contributed by
Freak-of-the-Week
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Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 04:06:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Would you like to caress my skin,
and love me for the girl I am within?--
To kiss me tender, full of care,
and run your fingers through my hair?...
I imagine I might tremble at your touch--
And melt, overcome by love, and such...
but do you misjudge me?
Even as you touch my leg, why is that so,
because you think I can't-- or won't-- say no?
Perhaps I wouldn't...but you're the adult, not I--
and would you really do that to me, with your lust the only reason why?
I'm sixteen-- a Junior-- with much yet to do,
yet you say that my body's old enough to belong to you?
You're handsome and charming-- romantic and sweet...
and I shiver in pleasure when graced by your heat...
Yet still I feel trapped-- caught young in a cage...
I don't care what you think -- I'm still a kid at my age.
So I'll say it as I brush your hands from my thighs,
as I wrench your sight from my breasts to my eyes...
"No."
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Re: Paper Cup Girl
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 01:04:27 AM AEST
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VERY good poem it gave me the shivers and
I like the sense of triumph at the end and how
you were able to stay strong and resist the
temptation. Good writing you really made the
reader feel the emotions within the poem.
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Re: Paper Cup Girl
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by russ-dawg on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 03:39:59 PM AEST
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| Oh man that was so real i felt like i was there that was a amzing poem! please keep up the writting! |
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Re: Paper Cup Girl
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by russ-dawg on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 10:46:21 PM AEST
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| OMG! I put keep up the writting like we were some strangers i know you will weather you relize it or not you creative person you!LOL ttyl! |
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Re: Paper Cup Girl
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by shutterfly2004 on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 10:35:02 PM AEST
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| This was such a good poem.... could you please comment me on my poetry sometimes..... Im glad you had the courage to say NO! I would have done the same thing that you did.. Keep up the good work |
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Re: Paper Cup Girl
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 11:25:17 AM AEST
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Bravo.. well written and I am gald at the end you had said no.. I think it is sick when an adult even says that or acts like that when you kno in your heart that it is the only reason they are intrested in you. they don't care about your feelings or how you'll hurt after the fact and it sickens me more when the person says yes.. I really liked this poem..
take care
christina |
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