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these things
Contributed by
Johndoe
on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 01:11:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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*Things like t h e s e ...
they cant be more real.
just let me watch you for a while
i want to feel.
things like t h e s e ...
they cant be fake
just sleep here for a while
and i will stay awake.
i'll catch your falls
if you'll catch mine..
in the center of four walls
intertwined.
let me steal your p a i n
i promise to remain.
fingers laced, and hearts locked
eyes in sight
and fear is lost..............
s t u n n i n g ...........
Ohh boy, Strum Away.......
and here is where my smile stays
in these days.
the sounds of your guitar
never let this get too far..
things like t h e s e ....
they must be a reality
just stay with me a while...
This Just cant be a F a L L a c Y *
Copyright ©
Johndoe
... [
2005-11-19 01:11:30]
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Re: these things
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 03:11:37 AM AEST
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Well if this is your first one then can't wait for the next one.
U have incrediable talent.
huggs, smiles,
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Re: these things
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by heartless_soul on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 04:35:47 AM AEST
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Welcom to YPDC I hope you enjoy it.
This is a very good first posting, I am looking forword to seeing what you will write next. you do have a wounderful talent please dont let it go to waist, read you later.
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