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Standing by the Foamy Sea
Contributed by
ThornMEngla
on
Wednesday, 10th July 2002 @ 03:20:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Closing my eyes at sunset
against the steamy
summer wind, whose hot
salty breath curled round my throat.
I stood there mute and grieving.
My toes gripped in cool
sand, as the taunting
sea whispered your name.
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2002-07-10 15:20:02]
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Re: Standing by the Foamy Sea
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 05:19:57 AM AEST
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wow very nice .
Jackie |
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Re: Standing by the Foamy Sea
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by trenikia on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 01:08:14 PM AEST
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great!!!!!!
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Re: Standing by the Foamy Sea
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by trenikia on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 01:09:14 PM AEST
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| its good but i dont really understand it. |
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Re: Standing by the Foamy Sea
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by Jacktripper on
Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 01:57:21 PM AEST
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| Nicely done, there's a cold to hot reference in the poem which could mean the cold is how you feel being alone and the heat is the anger you feel about why your alone. |
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