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hammer of god
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 05:28:24 PM in AEST
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whe are living in a world with so many new diseases
infected birds spreading there death with ease
slow outbreak a few die here and there
my mouth is in shock blank eyes i stare
soon will be walking with a gas mask in hand
while the infection covers the land
now they state aids and the flu are friends
they shook hands in the night and started a new descend
now weather and plagues they are something not new
but the destruction thats erupting like a boiling stew
what did they think polution would do
then we have storms a hammer of god
bowling over sin like a run away log
but thats to be expected what can we say
look at us and the way that we play
come on we reap what we sow
with all we do im still wondering why it was so slow
but in the right light the car emissions look quit bright
with a faded orange cast glow in the eve of night
yea its still poision in the air
but walking with your love one ah who cares
lol sorry i ended it this way i was trying to end at a happy note
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Re: hammer of god
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by brew on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 05:39:13 PM AEST
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HM..........way out write, with that ending.! Wasnt bad, just sad.~!
Yeah the world isnt ALL that great, But hey........it could be worse.! Thanks for posting Regan
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Re: hammer of god
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 05:58:30 PM AEST
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Regan I so much enjoy reading your work. Alot of truth behind the lines. A deep and very well written piece of poetry. Thanks so much for sharing with us ur wonderful poetry.
*hugs*
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Re: hammer of god
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 02:55:31 AM AEST
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Quite the emotive rant, and easily relatable too...I enjoyed this rather raw piece, and the irony to your words. Nice job!
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