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Let me be's
Contributed by
mindless-wish
on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 04:14:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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shall i write a story?
a story of my pain
a story from my life
the storys are all the same
to write a poem upon my wrist
to hug you tight to blow a kiss
with a knife or with a blade
my pointless life all which you've made
with my tears go with your lies
your taunting laugh my silent cry's
covered up no-one shall see
all self inflicted let me be's.
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mindless-wish
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2005-11-18 04:14:12]
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Re: Let me be's
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 08:13:20 AM AEST
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this is a sad poem .. but i thought it was so
awsome... great job!!!:) |
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Re: Let me be's
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 08:19:40 AM AEST
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A short, but very well written piece of poetry. I can feel ur pain through the words you've displayed before us. An emotionally packed poem that brings tears to fill ones eyes. Very well expressed. Well done.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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