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Late Night Thoughts
Contributed by
TheKid
on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 11:51:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I want to put a smile on your face
I want to feel your warm embrace
I want to be your one true love
I want to fly high with you peacefully like a dove
I want to be your ultimate hero
I want to bring your fears down to zero
I want to always be near
I want to dry up every tear
I want to be something that I am not
I want to be able to rewrite the plot
Easy come Easy Go I Say
I see a broken man in a reflection
Lost and seeking direction
Full of thoughts but mainly impossible feats
I begin my search on the darky empty streets
I want to be more
Strong like a lions roar
How can I reverse these deadly trends
I cannot begin to comprehend
Why I was put in this awful position
I have failed my mission
I want to be you
Let me make a new debut
I will not fail
I promise to prevail
I want to be
I'm lost for words
I want to be
I'm lost for words
I want to be
I'm lost for words
I want to be
Simply me
Copyright ©
TheKid
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2005-11-17 23:51:35] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Late Night Thoughts
(User Rating: 1 ) by Butterflygirl40 on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 12:43:00 AM AEST (User
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Kool!!! This was a very good poem
I liked it... I didnt see nothing wrong with it..
keep writing ... ^_^ |
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Re: Late Night Thoughts
(User Rating: 1 ) by ShesAKillerQueen on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 03:00:46 AM AEST (User
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Loved this write!
It was really beautiful, even if you did write it at some ungodly hour lol, thats where half the worlds famous poetry comes from...i can also relate to it, because im in love too.
^_^
keep it up!
~Riin |
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