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Commitment
Contributed by
Boof
on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 11:02:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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As I lay down next to you
I know this commitment can go through.
I think about it all night long
as I sing this lovely song..
Your the one I need
I know this yes indeed.
This commitment means alot to me,
and all I want to do is be close to thee.
As I think day by day
I know that I can stay
Stay with the one I love
and let know heaven above
That you're the one for me
Because it's your love that sets me free
Free from the sorrow and sadness
and your love to me is bliss.
This is to the angel I hold so dear
and I want to hold you ever so near.
As I lay down next to you.
I know this commitment will come true....
Copyright ©
Boof
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2005-11-17 23:02:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Commitment
(User Rating: 1 ) by enigma on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 07:06:48 AM AEST (User
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...very nice, warm, comforting...Love is like a fluffy, flannel, down-filled comforter...commitment is the furnace in the basement!
I bet she enjoyed your poem! I did.
Thanks
ron...enigma |
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