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A Dream of Blood
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 04:03:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Licking the blood off of my hands
I grin down at the sight
My eyes, red like the stained walls
My sword, my soul
Jutting out of his mangled corpse
His screams still echoing
Satisfaction flowing through me
Like heat massaging every fiber of my being
Malice and bloodlust
A need to kill embedded inside me
Yanking my sword from the ribs of the dead
I walk out into the shadows
Like a tiger
Awaiting my next prey
She walks into the scene
Her screams are sure to attract more
A bloodstained grin painted on my lips
As I jam my blade into her
Relishing the pain, the blood
Smirking down at the two mangled, twisted frames
I paciently wait for their screams to reach the ears of others
So that my ecctesy can continue
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DesolantDreamer
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2005-11-17 16:03:11]
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Re: A Dream of Blood
(User Rating: 1 )
by fredsmith on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 08:35:21 PM AEST
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that was a awsum poem
so dark indeed i luved it lolz
well anywayz 10/10
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Re: A Dream of Blood
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by CrystalTearsOfPain on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 01:29:20 PM AEST
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| Beautifully dark. A pure work of genious! |
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Re: A Dream of Blood
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by Suit_Of_Armor on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 07:39:34 PM AEST
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| That was definitly dark...and well written. It reminds me of someone...but I don't know who. *shrugs* possibly someone from a book. I really liked that poem. It was very good. Keep it up. |
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