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From the Inside- Out
Contributed by
EverlastingDawn
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Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 06:49:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Everyday I look at the world that surrounds me
The dreams of every person alive
The hope that each one holds on to
And yet it doesn't even matter at all
Because one person can be pushed aside
Or pushed into the spotlight
Without the earth even caring
Life will always go on
And time will continue to turn
Everything will come full circle
A life may come to its end
But another one just begins
Everyone and everything can be replaced
And I realize how small I truly am
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EverlastingDawn
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2005-11-17 06:49:08]
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Re: From the Inside- Out
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by enigma on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 08:07:39 AM AEST
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...very nicely expressed...a whole lifetime of observation effectively condensed to so few words...
...I'm afraid I am evolving into a soft, tenderhearted, hard determinist...freedom is a nice illusion...pick your illusion it seems...
..You might enjoy reading, "Illusions: adventures of a reluctant messiah..." It is by the same author as "Johnathon Livingston Seagull..." ...a quick read...
...I was thoroughly absorbed by your poem...intellect and emotion were skillfully blended...
...thanks...
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Re: From the Inside- Out
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 02:38:53 PM AEST
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| Nice poem. Put a smile on my face |
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Re: From the Inside- Out
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 05:18:59 AM AEST
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How true. Too often we think we can control more than our fair share, but most is beyond our grasp. Let us look through the eyes of humility. Well written.
Take care.
David |
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Re: From the Inside- Out
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by Loende on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 02:54:48 AM AEST
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It's a tough lesson to learn, but you expressed it well. This is something that I can relate to very much at this moment in time. These words do a lovely job of catching it all. Well done.
Be well,
Loende |
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