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Mask
Contributed by
wordsy
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Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 05:48:35 AM in AEST
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And there in lies the darkness,
behind this mask I wear.
Where hides the shame and sorrow
that it seems I’ve brought to bear.
And there the lonely tears I’ve cried,
for sadness sorry sake.
Are all that’s left of this sorrowed soul
I cannot seem to shake.
And then there dwells the demons,
I simply cannot hide.
And all the fears for all the years
I’ve kept here deep inside.
And so the silent secrets
whispered in the night.
And the thoughts I find, are all in kind
and do not make it right.
So you see, I’ve hidden,
yet not so far away.
Just behind this mask, you see,
is where I want to stay
Copyright ©
wordsy
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2005-11-17 05:48:35]
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Re: Mask
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by EverlastingDawn on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 06:40:28 AM AEST
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I really like this poem
It's beautiful and powerful
The way you describe it is amazing
Keep up the good work!
Nice write.
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Re: Mask
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 07:43:34 AM AEST
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beautiful wordsy:) its nice to see you again,
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Mask
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 08:14:24 AM AEST
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| KOOL!!! I LIKE YOUR POEM!! |
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Re: Mask
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by LongingFor on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 12:21:34 PM AEST
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very niice
i understand how u feel but dont stay behind a mask all the time. find a place outside of it and dwell on that
keep writing
~Sasha |
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Re: Mask
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 05:53:29 PM AEST
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heartfelt write. Its nice to see you back
Michelle |
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Re: Mask
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 07:43:40 PM AEST
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I really like this. There are so many poems about masks out there that they can become boring, and repetetive. This is different though. It's better written than most of them for starters.
The 'And' at the start of most of the stanza's is good. I like it. It's subtle, some poems which do that just sound... rushed and sloppy. This one is good.
A very creative write, I like how you have described what lies behind that mask.
Great write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Mask
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by endlesspath on
Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 01:43:42 AM AEST
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sometimes behind a mask helps for one not to see ,but a mask can hurt as well. not just yourself but others. maybe allow the mask to come off some.
endless |
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