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the way
Contributed by
chanceof_promise
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Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 10:02:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I hate the way our world works today.
I hate the way people yell at me and try to upset me best.
I hate the way you give me those looks
And I hate the way you talk to me
I hate the way you push me away,
Yet I hate it when you dont, even a little bit
I hate the way you treat me
Even more the way you dont
I hate the way you pass me by
I hate the way you change your mind
I hate the way you think
Even more I hate the way you dont
I hate the way you use me
And I hate the way you see me
Yet I hate the way you dont
I hate the way you dont care
And I hate the way you do
Its never enough no matter what I do
But yet I hate the way you are
I hate the way I care
Even more I hate the way I love you still
Even through it all..
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Re: the way
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by Ari on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 10:44:09 PM AEST
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I know exactly what you mean. I think everyone has been through that once or twice.
I find the best writes I have are during class as well, where my mind wanders the best.
"Even more I hate the way I love you still
Even through it all.." thats a great line.
Great stuff!
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Re: the way
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 11:23:08 PM AEST
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A poem I can so much relate to. A very well expressed and written piece of poetry. Keep penning down those emotions. Well done.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: the way
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 12:11:28 AM AEST
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| I know how you feel. great write!! |
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Re: the way
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by O7NeVeS on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 12:37:03 AM AEST
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| ...don't you hate that! I know I do...I def. can relate. Truthful write! Tanya |
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