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fluffy bunnies and coloured moonbeams
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 09:24:05 PM in AEST
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fluffy bunnies and coloured moonbeams isnt my deal
i like to talk of whats going on in the real
lost love and romance i write once in awhile
just to work on my writing style
but to right this drible day and day out
i wonder why we all walk with doubts
no one wants to face the outside world
they live in a fantasy of fluffy a squirrel
pretty flowers and buzzing bees
give me a break get off your knees
there is a society out there lost and confused
all stairing at a tv thats always in use
bleeding hearts and love sick poems
its not what drives me from my home
so if you want stories of playful cats
dont read my stuff thats not my fact
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2005-11-16 21:24:05]
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Re: fluffy bunnies and coloured moonbeams
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by brew on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 09:31:14 PM AEST
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DUH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Who wants fluffy bunnies and marshmellows beams.........................*shakes head* ACK!!!!!!!....................................................To my self it can be a fanstasy, yet..........make it cartoon. This way they CAN ALL be anything you make em.! Ok...I do understand the "whole" write.! Sorry, Im too unique to be the same.! Never have, Nor never will.! Cute, and way out write.!Way to go Regan.........:)
Brew~ |
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Re: fluffy bunnies and coloured moonbeams
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 10:09:02 PM AEST
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You certainly know how to draw ones attention, lol. I love your writes Reagan. They always have meaning and truth behind the lines. You can express yourself so openly and so well. You tell them the way it is. Well done.
*hugs*
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Re: fluffy bunnies and coloured moonbeams
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 10:51:00 PM AEST
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...sniff ... I like bunnies....
Okay, granted not everyone is gonna love romantic entanglements
and love-driven poems, but that's why we read all, right?
Wondrous diversity!!
This was an interesting take. For some, the "real" IS fluffy
bunnies and coloured moonbeams. BUT, be that as it may,
this was well expressed and deliberated.
I like your style.
~Breezy
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Re: fluffy bunnies and coloured moonbeams
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 12:08:16 AM AEST
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| kool!!! |
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Re: fluffy bunnies and coloured moonbeams
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 01:33:21 PM AEST
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great write honest and in your face all one can ask of an artist of any genre.
Ben |
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Re: fluffy bunnies and coloured moonbeams
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by sararose1950 on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 06:18:29 PM AEST
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| really cute and honest write (hides bunny behind back) *smiles* Peace and Light |
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