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Part of Me
Contributed by
XxNights_ChildxX
on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 09:02:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Look at that girl over there,
Why are her eyes always lined in black?
Maybe she just wants others to stare,
Or maybe she can't help but turn back,
Perhaps there's some hidden meaning,
To the darkness painted on those eyes,
Is she awake or off somewhere dreaming?
In her own world that she has disguised,
Concealed by the obscurity of cosmetics,
Most people can't see the real reason why,
The truth and freedom that it restricts,
She's constantly living one great big lie,
What hurt has she faced to deepen her eyes so?
And why is it that she can no longer trust?
Somebody broke it and then left her hollow,
Apparently she couldn't satisfy her lust,
He exploited her and made her believe,
That she was worth something,
Perhaps she was greatly deceived,
When he turned around and said she was nothing,
So maybe that's why her eyes are so overcast,
That's why those eyes don't smile,
She gave all her spirit to something that wouldn't last,
She took a leap of faith but fell a mile,
One always wonders why they're shadowed,
It's a wonder that those eyes can even see,
These eyes will be forever sorrowed,
Because those dark eyes are a part of me.
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XxNights_ChildxX
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2005-11-16 21:02:47]
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Re: Part of Me
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 09:10:38 PM AEST
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| its hard to live when you are living as sombody else...people dont always see your fake smiles or tears that you hide away...but there is somebody who finally will...nice write |
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Re: Part of Me
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 12:25:50 AM AEST
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| nice write!! |
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Re: Part of Me
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by mistifi on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 12:44:16 AM AEST
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| i understand this completely. ppl dont really look beyond what is in front of them. i enjoyed it even a lot. keep it flowing.. |
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