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Die
Contributed by
psycho101
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Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 05:01:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Everyone makes me so sick
Everyone always tells me I'm going to hell
to get rid of them all would be an incredible trick
with everyone gone my life will be healthier and well
blow their heads off with a gun
stab them with my treasured knife
killing them will be so much fun
put an end to their sorry life
slash you up and let you bleed
leave your tortured body to rot away
i've done another evil deed
my precious will kill your friends the same way
i'll slit your throat and keep on slaying
cut you with my razor and let the blood pour out
fall to your knees and start praying
that the immense pain doesn't make you shout
it is this feeling of killing that i crave
close your eyes and say good-bye
fall asleep down inside your grave
your worthless piece of crap--die
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Re: Die
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 09:00:46 PM AEST
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| well...that was a pretty morbid poem...i know how it feels to want to just choke everybody there is in this world and just belong to yourself...but killing just isnt the way to go...sometimes we just have to live through are troubles tho nothing may go as you want it to...and im guessing it already doesnt..but you sometimes just have to respect those who dont deserve it...and maybe everybody will look at you differently |
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Re: Die
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 04:14:19 PM AEST
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this is a great expression of anger towards someone or a group of people.. well put into words.. I think we all can relate to this with someone we know at times in our lives..
vampyress Jenni |
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