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I Vow To Love You...
Contributed by
eternal_dreamer
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Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 03:55:44 PM in AEST
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In my dreams I am with you
Beneath the willow tree
Where violets blow in flowery fields
You walk a mile with me
We find the abandoned spot we know
At the setting of the sun
Where evening tides crescendo
Serendipity has now begun
Behind my twisted broken smile
I’m in a state of bliss
I feel I’m surely amongst the blest
As we share a tender kiss
Cosy I cling to the dimensions of you
Invocation with my heart
You come and fix my shattered halo
Broken in so many parts
Stirring softly I begin to wake
Amidst a shooting star
A credo to us, together is made
Reflected way up far
I vow to love you with all my heart
As we dance among moonbeams
Two lovers waltzing for all eternity
Meeting inside their dreams
Copyright ©
eternal_dreamer
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Re: I Vow To Love You...
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 04:03:26 PM AEST
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to feel that way ah but alas single very great write with a lovely message i hope the moonbeams never end
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Re: I Vow To Love You...
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 04:25:35 PM AEST
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This write is for Billy "Man_On_High"
Thanks for everything...
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Re: I Vow To Love You...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 04:26:28 PM AEST
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wonderful sweet Sue,,
may all your wishes be granted
all your dreams come true
for you are a special lady
so I hope you are never blue
hugs me you....
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Re: I Vow To Love You...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 04:38:36 PM AEST
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Very soft write sue, very sweet. That longing feel of love, and when you finally grasp it, dreams truly are amazing. A heart touching write, may the light from the moon never go out, and your dreams keep coming.
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Re: I Vow To Love You...
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 05:28:50 PM AEST
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Great write....My brother is name Billy,he died 5 years ago...I wrote a poem about him but I name it dark angel......This is a very good poem.....God Bless!
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Re: I Vow To Love You...
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 07:04:39 PM AEST
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Very beautiful write, Sue.... Congrats to you both..
Hugs
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Re: I Vow To Love You...
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 07:51:16 PM AEST
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concrats and this is so beautiful
Michelle |
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Re: I Vow To Love You...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 09:23:15 PM AEST
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| this is a really nice poem...i hope you let billy read this..cuzi no id be happy if sombody wrote something like that about me |
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Re: I Vow To Love You...
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 12:13:06 AM AEST
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| beautiful write |
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Re: I Vow To Love You...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 01:56:49 PM AEST
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A most beautiful poem and sentiment my best 2 u both . . .
((((((sue)))))
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Re: I Vow To Love You...
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by jmpy84 on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 02:50:43 PM AEST
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| wonderfully down sue |
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Re: I Vow To Love You...
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 03:49:20 AM AEST
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That's really sweet Sue...I like how you incorporated parts of his poetry into yours, to make it that much more personal...I'm sure Billy loved this too. All the best to you both. Lovely write Sue, as always.
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Re: I Vow To Love You...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 12:57:03 PM AEST
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Sue, this is a beautiful loving write. How fortunatre you two have each other. I enjoyed reading it very much.
Thank you for sharing
Tim
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Re: I Vow To Love You...
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 01:43:50 AM AEST
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Beautiful I hope that the poem you posted
after this wasn't to Billy however. I loved this it
was very touching and I thought of Amanda
(my girlfriend) the whole time while I was
reading this. A wonderful write.
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Re: I Vow To Love You...
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by lil_noel09 on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 10:48:46 PM AEST
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| beautiful! your use of words is absolutely wonderful! this is definately one of my favorites of all those I've read on this site! :D |
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Re: I Vow To Love You...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 03:53:50 PM AEST
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| Very pretty poem.. may you always find and gain those dreams of value and agreeable happy times. Raquel Leah |
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Re: I Vow To Love You...
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by emystar on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 01:12:08 AM AEST
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Wow friend this is awesome!
Very beautifull. Sounds like heaven on Earth.
huggs,
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Re: I Vow To Love You...
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by Spike on
Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 08:09:11 AM AEST
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Nice poem,good structure, smooth rhyming, and a lovely, affirming message of committment.
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