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Old Friend
Contributed by
dalamar
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Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 02:52:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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She wants to be friends
But that is how it started
We were just friends
Then I got in to deep
And then I died
I said that I would never
Let her in again but
I think she learned her lesson
But have I mine
What do as time ticks away?
And still no answer
Maybe I will be just friends
But what if she wants more
What should I do?
Tick tock tick tock
Look at the clock
Tick tock tick tock
I should unlock myself
But what then
Maybe it is time to
Leave things in the past
To go one and just be friends
And nothing else
But....
Nothing.
Copyright ©
dalamar
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2005-11-16 14:52:43]
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Re: Old Friend
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 03:09:37 PM AEST
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well walk with a sheild dont let her get to close
thats all
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Re: Old Friend
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 09:49:02 PM AEST
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| hmm..from what i got out of your poem she must of hurt you pretty bad...she could have posibly changed her ways...but i wouldnt want to find out so quickly...maybe you should start talking to her a little bit but try not to get to close...but thats all a dicision you have to make...but good poem |
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Re: Old Friend
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by Shmokin on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 06:28:30 AM AEST
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| betrayal and the rebuilding of trust both rocky roads to walk down, well expressed :-) |
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