|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
Thoughts of a tired man
Contributed by
Kellros
on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 02:08:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
As this young drained body places itself on a stone bench
and tired eyes lift to a cloud filled sky
and shadows dance on the ground as the moonlight
comes and goes
like water down a river
till peace finds its place
in this heart.
Knowing where its strength comes from,
knowing what it is to be without,
appreciating silently the gentle breeze
and that one person that makes it alright.
Silence, thoughtless, just staring
into the heaven,
missing something, living today,
remembering everything that has made
it what it is today.
Soon enough its head will softly rest,
onto a pillow and dreams will reflect
the simphony, the orcestra of things,
of people... of love... of dreams.
But before things come to pass,
silently I will bow my head before I rest,
thanking God for everything
and everyone that haven`t left.
Copyright ©
Kellros
... [
2005-11-16 14:08:50] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Thoughts of a tired man
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 02:31:27 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Different, unique, find it kinda funny in a way! the poem reflects what you are. luv you. |
|
|
Re: Thoughts of a tired man
(User Rating: 1 ) by brew on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 09:26:50 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Well hope they KNOW you put all down and are taking the time, to try.!......................Sorry........ A sad, yet heartful write.! Maybe there is more.! Maybe you can see what you think you cant.! Beautiful,sad and soulful
Brew~ |
|
|
Re: Thoughts of a tired man
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 09:53:56 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this was a bit of a different poem...but not in a bad way...everything of the same stuff gets boring after awhile...this is poem is kinda sad but i really like it |
|
|
|