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A Nightmare On PalTalk Street
Contributed by
xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
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Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 01:28:10 PM in AEST
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47,530 people are now in 3,513 rooms!
It says above on the PalTalk Buddylist
Showing how many people there are
On a single internet chatprogram
Going by the name of PalTalk
Everyone getting their daily dosis
Of other peoples grief and misery
Having a moment in a day
Where we can drift away
From our own reality and life
Friends come, friends go
One day you are the most liked
The next day you are already forgotten
Finding truth on here is as rare
As finding a fresh lotus flower blooming
Escaping our own truth, getting involved
With all the misery on here
Our latest hurt, our latest crime
So openly told to the stranger online
Not knowing what will be done with it
Nothing is so fickle as this net
Crying behind our screens
Recovering from our latest lost friendship
We say to ourselves, why we try?
And think, this is just another nightmare,
A Nightmare on Paltalk Street....
~~ Nats ~~
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xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
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Re: A Nightmare On PalTalk Street
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 02:24:23 PM AEST
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WOW! hope your sitting 4 this comment cause i mean every sylable, u couldn't find more thruth in a peice of writting if u looked in the bible, you must have seen that movie i told u about, lol. girl, this is master peice, live with it. best damm poem i've ever read on here, not to mention the most honest, and i know what u mean about that site.
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Re: A Nightmare On PalTalk Street
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 06:20:13 PM AEST
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You sum it up in the lines
"Having a moment in a day
Where we can drift away
From our own reality and life"
The truth is, it isn't real life.......it never will be.It is only ever an escape from something.
Long lasting friendships can only come from the truth, not from lies.
Steve
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Re: A Nightmare On PalTalk Street
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:06:24 AM AEST
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What a wonderful and original poem about the Internet and finding truth on the Internet.
I love the metaphorical comparison you make here:
Finding truth on here is as rare
As finding a fresh lotus flower blooming
Brilliant :-)
Very well done, Nats.
I applaud thee.
Tim
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Re: A Nightmare On PalTalk Street
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 10:54:14 PM AEST
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This is so true ,, wow!! what a wonderful write.
welcome to your poetry dot com:) |
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Re: A Nightmare On PalTalk Street
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by JerBear314 on
Monday, 30th January 2006 @ 08:57:53 PM AEST
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| I couldnt have said it any better than you did....so i wont even try.....nicely done :) |
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Re: A Nightmare On PalTalk Street
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by Tiffyo4 on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 04:51:47 PM AEST
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| very nice write |
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Re: A Nightmare On PalTalk Street
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 06:12:44 AM AEST
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Bloody oath its fickle; one day cock of the walk, next a feather duster. That's why it will never replace the real thing, which is harder to build, but longer to stay. I haven't read anyone posting on this subject (except for cyber love and all that junk). Good stuff, Lady of the Windmills.
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