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I WANT TO SPEEK
Contributed by
maestar
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Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 11:26:24 AM in AEST
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So much to say, I can't exspress,
My words stuck in clay, I make a mess.
I hold my tonge to be correct,
My many mistakes I start to collect.
My soul is screeming to speek my mind,
The right centence i can not find.
To hurt your feelings would break my heart,
So I stop myself befor I start
So much to say I cant exspress,
So stop myself before I start.
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maestar
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2005-11-16 11:26:24]
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Re: I WANT TO SPEEK
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 12:36:18 AM AEST
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A very well written piece of poetry. You might just want to revise ur work for spelling mistakes before u post ur poem though. Otherwise a great write. Thanks for sharing it.
*hugs*
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Re: I WANT TO SPEEK
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by Lin54 on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 01:01:04 AM AEST
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Cute poem! Like your expressions of being tongue-tied--your spelling emphasizes it.
Lin54 |
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Re: I WANT TO SPEEK
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 06:31:34 AM AEST
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| Holly luv your poem, know what you mean.(hugs) xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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Re: I WANT TO SPEEK
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by Manda2 on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 05:02:08 AM AEST
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Brilliant Holly, speak you must!! Everything you have to say is so worth listening too. Keep it up!
xx |
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Re: I WANT TO SPEEK
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by Archie on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 12:48:25 AM AEST
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| I can understand this very well. I think it deserves a better total rating than it got. Thanks for your kind words and for your kind actions as well. |
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