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Sorry Friend
Contributed by
tacit_pain
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Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 01:33:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I hope you're ******* happy
With all the lies you've told
You make me feel worthless
Like something you just sold
You think you're so damn special
You think that I don't cry
You ignore me
Like you want me to just die
What do you want from me?
What's done is done
I can't take it back
It's only just begun
You say I'm a liar
When my honesty got us here
When I think of you
I'm stricken with fear
I don't want to lose you
I don't want you to hurt
But as of this day lately
You make me feel like dirt
It's not working out
And this makes me cry
I hate to tell you this
But it might be good bye
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tacit_pain
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2005-11-16 01:33:18]
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Re: Sorry Friend
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 01:43:52 AM AEST
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awwwwwwww a very sad poem!!!
but friends are suppossed to forgive
and forget!! hope you and your friend can
work it out!! good write tho.
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Re: Sorry Friend
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 05:03:49 AM AEST
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| I know the feeling..me and my friend had exactly the same problem but we managed to sort it out...hope everything works out for you 2! Good write thanx! |
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Re: Sorry Friend
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 11:17:44 AM AEST
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| I lost my best friend earlier this year...she stabbed me in the back by trying to split my family up... I had to make the hard decision of walking away from her....it hurts so much but some times it is for the best.....this is a very emotional write thank you for sharing xx |
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Re: Sorry Friend
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 11:50:20 AM AEST
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Hmmm...did you try to make friends with the same person as me??? Geesh...I know this scenario, and it's not a pleasant ending. This is a seriously emotive write, and your hurt feelings jumped out with every word. Good job, and I love that ending. I'd say move on...
Scorp.
(Who doesn't think people like this, are friends at all....) |
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