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Rising
Contributed by
waos
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Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 01:01:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Rays pierce through to my core -
can't conceal my crimes.
Lie, knife raised, for sacrifice.
Shine the light -
Lift my skies.
Broken here,
remnants of rain still rest on my cheeks;
warmth of light frozen in ice,
weight of the skies in my eyes.
I can feel the clouds being swept away,
the sun is rising now today.
Shine the light -
lift the skies...
reign over me today.
Night holds no power;
sing a sweet song of renewal.
Shine your light -
lift the skies...
reign over me today.
~Waos~
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waos
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2005-11-16 01:01:00]
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Re: Rising
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 08:12:27 PM AEST
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I can so much relate to your poem. A deep heartfelt write. I've been down that path before.
May ur days ahead always remain merry and bright. A very well written and presented piece of poetry. Thanks so much for sharing it.
*hugs*
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Re: Rising
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 02:36:55 PM AEST
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A poem of a most poetic and loving nature in which your true spirit reveals it self, a splendid creation u have shared with us.
Ben |
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Re: Rising
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 11:18:48 AM AEST
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I agree! Very inspirational!!!
Well crafted too!
You have a very unique poetic style, wonderful job! |
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