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Lingering Soul of Mine
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
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Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 12:35:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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In the lingering soul of mine I see darkness and the light of day I want more in my soul but all i think is oh my god what will I do? Can I dream, can I think, will dreams ever be sane? Fighting cruel hitting tired. Will things ever be good? What do you see, can you see the things I do,so you actually see me? I may have a smile on my face, but do you know if its real? There is a crying child inside me what can i do? I may talk like a goodie goodie but in ways I want to be mean is that wrong?When I have tears in my eyes do you know if they are real? Do you actually know if im real i mean really do you? do you know me dreams of terror and sorrow? Do you hear my cries at night? Do you know when im hurting? Please dont kill that little child inside, for one day she may smile.....
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Re: Lingering Soul of Mine
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by OzChick on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 12:40:48 AM AEST
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| Very interesting. |
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Re: Lingering Soul of Mine
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 12:50:35 AM AEST
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| wow ... very interesting. I enjoy reading it. |
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Re: Lingering Soul of Mine
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 02:14:18 PM AEST
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this is absolutley beautiful so tearful made my heart swell i love reading your poems for it like reading your heart, and a beautiful one it is.
(((((((Kayla)))))))
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