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Painful Air
Contributed by
b_rand
on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 12:27:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Baby, you're gone but you're still on my mind
I'm in your past but can't leave you behind
I always knew my life would end when you leave
And now that you're gone, I don't want to breathe
And skyward glances at night are all dark
The lights have all faded, I can't find the stars
And with their departure, my hope's left the earth
Should I call you for comfort, things only get worse
So now I just sit here in darkness alone
The temperature dropping, my body feels cold
My emotions are drained and my energy's gone
I don't have the strength and don't want to go on
Copyright ©
b_rand
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2005-11-16 00:27:44]
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Re: Painful Air
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by OzChick on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 12:53:26 AM AEST
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| This is very expressive and despairing. Good write. I'm sorry you just got dumped but maybe you are better off with out this person. All things happen for a reason, I believe that anyway. Blessed be. |
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Re: Painful Air
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by Kaiba on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 01:08:32 AM AEST
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| I feel your pain... Im sorry. Good but depressing read. |
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Re: Painful Air
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 01:59:10 AM AEST
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its never nice to be dummped
i know the feelign to well
its a really good read
and a great write |
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Re: Painful Air
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by eternal_sorrows on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 11:19:40 PM AEST
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Excellent display of emotions written here. I know this feeling too and I hope your on your feet and breathing again soon.
ES |
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Re: Painful Air
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by deathbringer on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 10:10:16 PM AEST
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| I know this feeling too well.I know it burns and it hurts like hell but the sun will shine for you again.good poem.A bit depressive but enjoyable read.good work. |
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