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This Brick Wall
Contributed by
eternal_sorrows
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Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 12:24:26 AM in AEST
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One by one through the years
a wall was built with pain and fears.
Brick by brick it was laid
on solid ground where it stayed.
I tried to listen as you spoke to me
words of wisdom and prophecy.
Yet, I could not hear through the wall
built with strength as not to fall.
Then one day from the sky
I thought I heard an angel cry.
Weeping softly teardrops fell
gathered from life's wishing well.
Two more angels joined her side
and hand in hand all three cried.
Thunder bellowed, rain did fall
tearing down my sturdy wall.
Yet, through the fog I found my way
so brick by brick I build today.
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Re: This Brick Wall
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by b_rand on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 12:31:58 AM AEST
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| this is a very inspirational poem ... it delivers the message "when you fail, try again" or "don't give up, keep pushing" ... i needed to read something like this ... thank you |
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Re: This Brick Wall
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 01:40:49 AM AEST
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| very nice |
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Re: This Brick Wall
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 05:57:50 AM AEST
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| Very beautiful indeed and very well written! |
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Re: This Brick Wall
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by Caged Soul on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 06:54:18 AM AEST
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Most of us has that brick wall that was built with our pain and fears. And this is not always bad, although it sometimes keeps us from reaching ouir full potential.
We know that we need to tear this wall down, but it's hard on your own. We sometimes need the help of those angels to make the process less traumatic. And, although it may not seem so at first, it always works out in the end!
Thanks for sharing this lovely piece.
Ash~ |
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Re: This Brick Wall
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 09:36:30 PM AEST
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Bravo!! Flow, rhyme, imagery , this is an exceptional bit of writing. I REALLY liked this. You are quite good!
Very well written
Larry |
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