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Everything is gone
Contributed by
LostInLife
on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 10:17:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Everything has changed
I have changed
I lost hope
In life
In everything
I feel like nothing
Im separating myself
From friends
From everyone
I dont know what to do
Im lost
Where did all my faith go
I hate it all
Im falling apart
Piece by piece I break
Until theres no more
All I want is to feel whole again
Like I once did
Before love ***** me up
Maybe you will help me
Make me feel right
Don't know if you feel the same as me
But hopefully you do
So we will collide
And we will be one
Copyright ©
LostInLife
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2005-11-15 22:17:59]
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Re: Everything is gone
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 11:19:33 PM AEST
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This is filled with raw emotion. I can read that it all seems difficult and your effects go unnoticed , But it also tells of strength . Strength I feel that you will find and then you can be whole again. Keep the faith. Thanks for sharing it is a good write.
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Re: Everything is gone
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 12:12:37 AM AEST
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this is a very emotional write .. keep the faith.
i also have my bad times but when i do i always keep the faith... thanks for sharing this . this was a great poem.
god bless you .. and take care!
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Re: Everything is gone
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by OzChick on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 12:22:14 AM AEST
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| An eloquent expression of emotional pain, this is a well written free verse. I've felt like this before. Not just love but life is hard to take sometimes. Stay strong. |
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