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Instiled Ponders
Contributed by
brew
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Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 09:07:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The cold dark night
The wind which send cold shivers down the spine
Thoughtless
Motionless
The sound of nothing
This is the feeling of loss
The feeling of something; yet nothing
No turning to anyone, or thing
So you close the eyes
You vision beauty
You open the eyes
BLANK
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Re: Instiled Ponders
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by Boof on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 09:20:12 PM AEST
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| Very well written , good peice of poetry. |
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Re: Instiled Ponders
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by Ari on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 10:07:05 PM AEST
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Wow, nice.
I get the feeling that this has something to with death? or possibly loneliness?
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Re: Instiled Ponders
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 10:38:34 PM AEST
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Dear Brew,
I like to do what your poetry tells me to.
Close my eyes, and feel not, the empty feeling of nil.........and then open my eyes, and like you Blank............I never know where you may carry my mind or my heart brew, but I'm never disappointed when I do what you tell me too.
Very Good Brew
Warm love
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Re: Instiled Ponders
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 11:22:46 PM AEST
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Nice write. Good choice of words to carry your feeling.
Whisper |
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Re: Instiled Ponders
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 12:06:06 AM AEST
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this is a nice poem. very picturesque and well expressed. enjoyed a lot
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Re: Instiled Ponders
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 01:23:12 AM AEST
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Very mystified write but still it's awesome as it exersizes the brain that we don't use too often.
very good way to center the soul.
luv, huggs, big smiles,
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Re: Instiled Ponders
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 07:06:41 AM AEST
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Very in depth thoughts indeed. Very well penned...I like the whole thing but these last few words are just really effective IMHO:
"You vision beauty
You open the eyes
BLANK"
Thanks for sharing,.
Tim
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Re: Instiled Ponders
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 11:32:46 AM AEST
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Dayna, your writes are getting steadily more introspective, and in depth. I really like this piece.
Great food for thought, and full of emotion. Very good job!
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Re: Instiled Ponders
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 08:19:22 PM AEST
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WoW Dayna I like the way you've presented this to your reader. You're an amazing Miss who is gifted and who has the ability to pen down her inner thoughts and feelings.
Thanks for sharing this brilliant piece of yours with us. You rock Girl!
* much love,*
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Re: Instiled Ponders
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 09:31:38 AM AEST
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Abstract indeed, but extremely emotive! Well done Dayna!
"The feeling of something; yet nothing"
Yes ... loved THAT! This was a wonderful piece. I can
both relate and feel YOU through it.
Moved ...
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Re: Instiled Ponders
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 01:41:31 AM AEST
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Just had to read this again. It is truly brilliant.
Tim
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Re: Instiled Ponders
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by Spike on
Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 08:22:27 AM AEST
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Brew,
I enjoyed this post, having felt the same way on many cold, windy nights. Very Zen, in the end. Did you mean 'envision beauty' in the 3rd last line?
Happy holidays to you, too.
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Re: Instiled Ponders
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by wizard on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 09:21:22 PM AEST
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wow brew...this was nicely done...i loved every line! it comes straight from your inner thoughts, that differ so much from others on the site!!
wizid |
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