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Candy in my heart
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 08:44:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Blue walls falling into ponds
waves to wash away my ways
On the page one not belongs
but in the heart for days and days
In the sun and by the flame
i share the paint that shaves the hate
In my words it's not the same
but love has found me not too late
Keep this candle lit in me
so i can share my smiles
I hope i'll someday witness free
and walk for miles and miles
With candy in my heart i talk
back into a candle's light
With candy in my hand i walk
to brave the cold of night...
snow's a falling.
dw
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Re: Candy in my heart
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 08:55:19 PM AEST
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..so beautifully poetic in every way-
I really love the title line appearing in the last stanza..very powerful-
also the last line..a drifting thought.
very fairy-tale like..
I could go on and on with this..
extremely well written.
(stops ramblin and clicks ok)
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Re: Candy in my heart
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 10:29:59 PM AEST
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DW absolutely sensational. You can always produce awesome captivating writes. I love this one. The rhyming and flow of the poem absolutely wonderful.
With candy in my heart i talk
back into a candle's light
With candy in my hand i walk
to brave the cold of night...
snow's a falling.
5 stars for u my friend.
*hugs*
sue
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