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The emptyness that lays inside me
Contributed by
roxygirl
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Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 07:15:02 PM in AEST
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Theres this emptyness inside me I can not fill
I don't know waht it is
I try to forget about it as if it isn't there
But it's killing me inside
This big empty hole that makes me cry
I feel so hurt and in so much pain
What is this emptyness some one please help me
It's controlling my life
It's taking over my body
I don't understand why I'm feeling this why
Why does my heart hurt and wont so much I can not handle
I'm so lost in these emotions
I feel I'm losing myself in this place I've traped myself
I can not say if this emptyness exist
But it's there in my soul, traped in my heart and it's starting to spred through out my whole body
I'm falling in this confusness and I could feel me draning
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Re: The emptyness that lays inside me
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by Minus_Blindfold on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 07:50:45 PM AEST
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| What causes this emptiness? Only then can I help.... |
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Re: The emptyness that lays inside me
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by SPOKENWORDARTIST on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 08:04:37 PM AEST
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WHAT MAKE YOU WHOLE AGAIN IS TO HAVE SOMEONE APERCIATE THE TRUE BEAUTY OF THE WOMEN YOU TRULY ARE.
FOR THIS EMPTINESS YOU FEEL IS NOT LONLINESS OR HEARTACHE BUT YOUR UNWILLINGNESS TO SEE YOUR TRUE BEAUTY INSIDE AND OUT EVEN WHEN OTHERS DONT.
KEEP YOUR HEAD AND KNOCK'EM DEAD WHEN YOU WALK BY AS THEY ADMIRE THE BEAUTY YOU PORJECT. |
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Re: The emptyness that lays inside me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 08:45:19 PM AEST
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| I agree that I can't be much help until I know what I can't say..and what I should say. The holes usually tend to be lonliness for a kindred spirit...either you push everyone away or you pretend to be someone you're not or someone smashed your heart into pieces. ANyway you look at it, all that can be done is to be yourself, throw your shoulders back and pick your head up. From there, the world is your oyster. Go out, make a new friend..get into something you really love doing...anything but sitting still and letting your mind and soul sink into the hole..I'm not saying things will get better...but I think that it will help |
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Re: The emptyness that lays inside me
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by OzChick on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 12:37:19 AM AEST
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| Grief left a hole in my heart when my mother died last year, it still feels like yesterday. So many people I know are on antidepressants, but I chose a more natural approach. St Johns Wart. It has been really helpful. This is not advice, I'm just telling you what I did. Stay strong Roxygirl. You are a very eloquent poet. Blessings. |
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Re: The emptyness that lays inside me
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by chanceof_promise on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 03:27:59 PM AEST
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| i like this..just cause i have felt that empitness..but now i am working on filling it.. |
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Re: The emptyness that lays inside me
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by brokenheartsbleed on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 07:34:27 PM AEST
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| great poem. i think everyone feels that emptyness sometimes. |
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Re: The emptyness that lays inside me
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by Angelseyes on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 07:25:40 PM AEST
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| This poem seems to be a a struggle with in. Express your self! ;) |
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