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Vampire’s Revenge
Contributed by
coral
on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 04:41:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Vampire’s Revenge
Tonight he seeks cold revenge
The death of his dark bride
He comes to avenge
For every drop she bled
Shall a hundred fold
Be shed
For the stake driven into her heart
Their mortal bodies
Be picked apart
With seething rage
He anticipates
The start of his bloodiest rampage
Her scent lingers on him
She will be honored this night
By their agony as they scream
Tonight he will find peace
The death of their souls
Will grant his bride release
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coral
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2005-11-15 16:41:57]
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Re: Vampire’s Revenge
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 05:21:20 PM AEST
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| ooo..very well written...i really like this..ecspecially since i am a HUGE vampire fan...great poem..keep it up |
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Re: Vampire’s Revenge
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by ceras_hearts_lestat on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 07:07:59 PM AEST
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| awww...thats so sweet in a like very creepy, romantic, sounds like my boyfriend would if something happened to me. very well done! |
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Re: Vampire’s Revenge
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by Minus_Blindfold on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 07:57:52 PM AEST
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| Personally, I'm not that impressed! In order to write a dark poem about a vampire you need to go deeper...be it more lengthy or not. Not saying it's the worst poem i've ever read, just a little constructive critizism from a big fan of vampire's. |
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