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see it in me
Contributed by
hearts4pain
on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 04:38:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i long to say "i love you"
cant you see it in my eyes?
i cant find a way to tell you but somehow i think you know
when i look at you and you look at me...
and we just simply smile
the feeling is so great and my heart races- it gives me the shivers
its not just a quick stare but i know that the "look" goes deeper
cant you see it in my eyes?
you make me so happy
gosh i love the way you smile
i love it when you laugh
i love to play with your hair though you get mad
i love the feeling when your arms wrap around me for a big hug
i love sitting there with you, holding you in my arms
oh yes and i love the way you smell!! haha
i love that your my friend and how you are there for me
i dont think i could ask for anything more
you know all this. i know you do.
cant u see it in my eyes
: im sooooooo in love with you :
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Re: see it in me
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by Suzy on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 05:13:42 PM AEST
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| Love is grand. Nice poem |
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Re: see it in me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 05:25:24 PM AEST
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| The one you love is very hard to find...but once he relizes you are the one for him..im sure he'll come back to you |
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Re: see it in me
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by Dri on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 07:11:44 PM AEST
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| so very sappy... i feel like this is lacking a little style. i'm not saying it's bad, just a tad young for me. |
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