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Through Death-walker's Eyes

Contributed by dthwlkr on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 08:03:26 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Staring into the pit you call life
Beyond the blinding veil of dark light

I stare, stare at all that’s around me
Can’t see, But I feel you, Blinded, can’t see

Can’t live, no in your world, can’t live
Feeding on my love……… my love, you, none to give

Can’t turn blind to your hypocrisy
It’s you, disillusioned not me, can’t you see

As I breathe the air around you, I suffocate
Cauz you reek, oh you reek of hate

But things were different at the start
And my love, you still had a heart
But soon the black sun rose over the screaming sky
My own light fading as the day turns evanescent…..oh why

Madness stirs in every heart, sanity fades, I cry
Mothers kill their new-born, blacker turns the dark, no trace of tears, yet…………I cry
Self-pity, desperation flows filling my veins with loathing for my own
Is all lost??? Oh, for I hear even the heaven groan

Will the flowers ever bloom under the shadow of the dark hood?
Will the blood-stained, crimson moon ever shine………I wonder if it could
And I wonder where did the smiles go
Watching the destruction and the fallen’s lust grow

As I walk through their scarred, shredded souls
They stare with minds laid bare and dark as holes
For I still carry within me the light
Though diminished, yet pure, however slight

Today though I fade away, searching into the oblivion
But one day I shall return, with my own pure sun
Upon the darkness of the fallen it shall descend
Banishing the corrupt, over the skies it shall ascend

When finally the dark deeds are undone and the black sun unmade
When the flowers again shall shine beneath the silver moon never to fade
Then I shall search for you
Close and no matter how far, I shall search for you

Never your trust will I betray
From this darkness I shall deliver you to our day
Cauz I know, from the ashes I shall resurrect the sun
For I know I’m the defiant………. Yes the chosen one.

Copyright Â© dthwlkr ... [ 2005-11-15 08:03:26]
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Re: Through Death-walker's Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_and_Cold on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 06:48:37 PM AEST
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This poem had it's literary moments (third to last stanza, particularly), but it would be better if it was a lot shorter and more focused.

Brandin

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