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Pain
Contributed by
vampirex
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Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 02:18:52 AM in AEST
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Even through time who would of thaught
that I would find what I sought
After I grew over the years
I never knew I would shed all these tears
I woke up one day wondering about life
Only dreaming of having a wife
But now that I am older
My words grow bolder
I lost a child of my making
Oh if god only knew what he was taking
The pain grows like a valcano inside me
But I can't let anyone show pity on me
I have to be strong and have no fears
So that my beautiful wife doesn't have to shed tears
without her I would be lonely, a loser, a bum
I owe her my life and then some.
Copyright ©
vampirex
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2005-11-15 02:18:52]
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Re: Pain
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by Shattered_soul on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 03:47:27 AM AEST
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That was sad, but awasome, I um... yeah I sleep when I am sleeping, I would personally be scared if I had a pen next to me in my sleep, I might hurt myself.
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Re: Pain
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 04:23:45 AM AEST
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wow freaky
good write |
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Re: Pain
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 07:30:59 AM AEST
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THAT WAS SAD:( BUT IT WAS AWSOME!!
GREAT JOB!!! |
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Re: Pain
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by Poetic_Influence on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 10:42:04 AM AEST
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| My father, in his marriage before my mom, also lost a child, and it was very hard for him, so from his words i can understand how it must feel, good write |
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Re: Pain
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 06:41:53 PM AEST
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A sad, heart touching and very well written piece of poetry. So sorry for the loss of ur child. May you have an eternity of love and happiness with ur beautiful wife. Well done on producing a true heartfelt write.
*hugs*
sue |
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Re: Pain
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by brew on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 09:57:09 PM AEST
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hm had a friend who lost as well........guess it hurts more than ONE could expect.! Couldnt imagine........Sad.......but heartful write.! Thanks for sharing
Brew~ |
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Re: Pain
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by b_rand on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 12:38:55 AM AEST
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| thats very interesting that you wrote this in your sleep ... it shows you really are worried about these things ... true feeling |
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