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Classroom Reminiscing
Contributed by
waos
on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 12:21:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Broken chalk - half of whole -
dust settled, awaiting,
swish of steps to lift.
Relaxed slumber,
hiding dreams,
dying to choke throats - fill lungs -
with dry school memories.
White 5 gallon pail:
like at home on the farm;
we'd shovel feed until wholly coated,
then bear the burden of beasts to the barn.
It rests protected thinly
from the age-old garbage,
the waste products of a mind,
rejected ideas,
and confirmed failures of red.
Copyright ©
waos
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2005-11-15 00:21:09]
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Re: Classroom Reminiscing
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 12:35:59 AM AEST
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Such eminent beauty this touched my heart i
still long 4 those days you have a real treasure here that will never fade and so beautiful from begining 2 end, lovely peice of writting.
(((((waos)))))
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Re: Classroom Reminiscing
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by Dizza_13 on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 01:25:22 AM AEST
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| mmm chalk |
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Re: Classroom Reminiscing
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 09:07:26 PM AEST
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truly poetic..
to conjure these words
from that which inspired you..
is in itself..brilliant-
extremely well written and very idealistic.
5 on this from me.
B
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