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wash my hands in my heart
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 11:41:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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wonderful ways family display the love that they show
while all the while the turn a smile when you finally go
bestfriends brothers just words to you
all you want is the money thats due
then you my real brother the one who is blood
you are the one with the least of a grudge
you may be in scawler living on a friends couch
but i didnt ask you to be the ignorant grouch (edited but you get the drift)
and there i am living a comfortable life
i didnt tell you to leave your trashy wife
your call me by phone both 2 months a part
the words you guys said ripped out my heart
hey got any cash oh what a line
not how you been oh brother of mine
you say i owe you guys you taught me my ways
i really don't understand how you think i have to pay
my one dear spirit brother i say here today
you taught me nothing in no bloody way
i haven't seen you in fifteen danm years
what have you taught me when you are not here
to my real brother this i will finally tell you
i wash both my hands of him and you two
from this sadness and anger i write
to see what i've seen the other night
i am sick and tired of lies and sick games
alone i guess its always the same
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Re: wash my hands in my heart
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 12:41:40 AM AEST
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a lot going on here it is worth reading, you
write a very discriptive no noncence or
bells or whistles style of poem keep it up,
seems you've masterd the knack of just being you and getting it across very well i
might add.
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Re: wash my hands in my heart
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by brew on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 10:03:38 PM AEST
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As I told a nother who wrote of their family...........isnt it wonderful!? Have a sister who is like that..........tries to make all think SHES the one, and Im nothing.........well, thats the way life goes.! Just wash the hands of all..........and dont dwell on what they say to hurt you, Regan.! PPl and especially family can be Horrible.................
Brew~ |
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Re: wash my hands in my heart
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 07:45:30 PM AEST
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Reagan we can choose our friends, but sadly we can't choose our families. A deep and emotionally packed write. It pains you to write these words, but It's the sad truth. Chin up my friend. Look ahead to your future. May ur days ahead be filled with love, health and happiness.
*heartfelt hugs for u*
~sue~ |
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