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force-fed religions true light spent a goverment thats to far bent
Contributed by
lostrelic
on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 05:47:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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terror alert rapture valley red hidden vision all from my bed
scorpions in flight and locusts breath singeing thoughts of spirits rest
fragrants pungent of stale death rotting aromas tasting flesh
force-fed religions true light spent a goverment thats to far bent
fading in pride losing all stride of the ways your fathers had walked
blinded by sin and all on a whim we hear the echo of there talk
they speak of a day when we all will pay of the flamboyant ways we live
disrespecting the old and scolding the fold we spread the way we give
dancing on graves of the people who raised the image of full respect
neglecting the vows we promised ourselves with venom we infect
bleeding sores as demons sour harvesting the weak and the lame
planting doubt a round about making us all so tame
fighting words of stolen verbs i sharpen my pen today
the say its mighter then the sword i guess they never played
ink marks stain but the sword really drains blood the guide of life
but with a bond we hold out long to avoide the long world of strife
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Re: force-fed religions true light spent a goverment thats to far bent
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 01:09:38 AM AEST
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this is magnficent 2 say the least your writting is deffinately in a class by itself,
nice style u have, a non style, as bruce lee once put it "no style is a style in it self " and
this is very readable seems you have tapped in 2 the very nature of poertry, namely simplifying the complexity 4 the masses, well done . . .
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Re: force-fed religions true light spent a goverment thats to far bent
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 07:43:37 PM AEST
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| This was a great poem. i could really feel the anger that the narrator feels, its that well expressed! |
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