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As You Depart
Contributed by
AzurePaladin
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Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 09:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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cried when you left
knew you'd be back
but I don't have that patience
especially since I still feel your arms
I wonder if you saw me there
that longing gaze
as you drove away
I saw you blow a trusting kiss
Copyright ©
AzurePaladin
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2003-01-22 21:40:00]
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Re: As You Depart
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by AzurePaladin on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 02:19:31 PM AEST
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Awwww....
I know which day this was...... we still had a week, and now we are back together. :* :D
It's a great poem... and I dont care how many reads it gets. You have great talent.
I love you. :D
~Mike :* <3 |
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Re: As You Depart
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by AzurePaladin on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 02:31:00 PM AEST
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| LOL Mikey signed in my name then commented! *blushes* Hope that doesn't look too suspicious! |
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Re: As You Depart
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 08:56:27 PM AEST
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Not at all! Great short poem.
Blessings
Andrew |
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