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LOVELY WINTER QUEEN
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 04:56:04 PM in AEST
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LOVELY WINTER QUEEN
Lovely Winter Queen cold bare feet of frost,
Your soft white gowns laden diamonds embossed.
Majestic sculpturing, crisp chilling creativity.
Hand sewn blankets float cozy covers comely
Your lover Jack Frost paints places you miss,
Nimble, naughty, never finished love's bliss
Embracing critters under his ice for survival,
Near your inner heart sleeping bears cuddle,
Ah Lovely Queen of Winter, you kindly hesitate,
'Til harvest is done, round mounds of hay--you wait,
Preparing your lovely gown with it's long train.
Material so fine called Colorado Powdered Champagne.
Hospitality you emit, your greatest characteristic
You bond with mighty mountains to perform your magic
Welcoming everyone young, small, old and tall.
Splendid Skiing you encourage with each snowfall
A feeling of Awesome accomplishment is your challenge
Thin boards attached and down a steep side we plunge
My bones are old now, I wouldn't even dare......
yet,
I will n'er forget, as down your train I slid
safe in your loving care.
Created by
Lovingcritters
ConSue
November 12, 2005
Now that I'm 68, I have
to agree with Erma Bombeck
who said:
"Skiing: I do not participate in any sport
with ambulances at the bottom of the hill"
*Sliding Ski Smiles*
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lovingcritters
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Re: LOVELY WINTER QUEEN
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 06:12:51 PM AEST
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Hmm wonders why someone gave you a 1 star.
I thought this was an excellent write.
I give you a 5 star for this
love and hugs |
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Re: LOVELY WINTER QUEEN
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 06:19:19 PM AEST
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Hi ConSue!
Ylu did it again. With these luring and delightful poems you awaken memories of my childhood. Oh wintry it was indeed. And mother used to tell us the story of te Snow Queen and Snow Princess, with a picture book to go wit it.
And I went skiing too, but sometimes later on. And loved it so000000000.
This lovely work awakens all the sweetest memories.
Pictures too a glorious, just as the poem is.
Thanks so much for sharihg it with us.
Warm love
Elizabeth
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Re: LOVELY WINTER QUEEN
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 07:12:38 PM AEST
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LOL I used to read Erma Bombecks column, I miss her greatly.
This poem is extremely well put together, a very refreshing write... Thank you for the pictures, to accompany your lovely words... And I really love the title... Yes 5 stars from me as well... 1* 2* 3* 4* 5* and then some more *****
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: LOVELY WINTER QUEEN
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 08:47:43 PM AEST
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| Five stars for me! The pictures the music & the words to boot were so beautiful & fit together so well! I'm not much of a winter person but this poem changed how I see winter for sure! thanks!Christina |
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Re: LOVELY WINTER QUEEN
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 09:40:32 PM AEST
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Wow! A Winter wonderland of beauty!
I once lived in Denver-n-Morrison Colarada.
my son went to Red Rocks Elementary School.
Mom u have once again triggered golden memories for me. no wonder u so tuff. i would never have even tried sking but I luved to watch the ones that were corages enuff to be free.
The pictures aremakable.
Thanks for sharing this mom.
A masterpeice of heaven on planet Earth.
4 eva luv,
yobrat,
emy |
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Re: LOVELY WINTER QUEEN
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by paul_x_walker on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 10:24:43 PM AEST
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| wow yet another wonderful write for miss lovingcritters |
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