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To Bad
Contributed by
DamentedSuicide
on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 03:05:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A midnight Kiss
Candlelight diners
Gazing at the stars
Lovers hand in hand
Sad she's not his only one
a promise to both
Her ring matching the others
To bad she doesn't know
She gave him her heart
He told her his lies
She said I love you
He asked for proof
She was his for the taking
He wasnt gentle
He wasnt careful
A loss of innocence
A broken promise
A shattered heart
Tears in the moonlight
Suddenly he was gone
A ghost in the wind
A child having an abortion
All in the name of love
To bad he'll never know
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DamentedSuicide
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2005-11-14 15:05:14]
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Re: To Bad
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by Sinfullilmissmuppet on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 05:35:17 PM AEST
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Hey,
really sad write
I;ve had an abortion
Emotions goin crazy over this one
hope your ok
till next time,
emz |
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Re: To Bad
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 10:46:58 AM AEST
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This was really sad.. It is a shame that people have to do that.. Very sad..
Take care
christina |
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Re: To Bad
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by BrokenXbyManyX on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 06:45:08 PM AEST
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I liked this.
Young, and vulnerable seems to be what some guys like sadly enough.
Anyways I like this one a lot...nice job. |
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