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Rainy Grey Shade
Contributed by
grey_matters
on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 02:18:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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It's a storm story,
The rain brings down,
I won't worry,
Between clouds and ground,
I think maybe,
I'm above it now,
She made me,
Then let me down,
He let me down, she let me down...
Believe me - leaves need fire,
like plants need water,
It's easy - to want what you will,
'till you have it and you hate it,
It's a rainy grey shade...
It's a rainy grey shade...
It's a really great daze...
Today is same...
Black bruise water,
I'm in it now,
in wide wonder,
But no know how,
There's no thunder,
Before it lightnings down,
No warning,
He let me drown,
He let me drown, she let me drown...
Believe me - leaves need fire,
like plants need water,
It's easy - to want what you will,
'till you have it and you hate it,
It's a rainy grey shade...
It's a rainy grey shade...
It's a really great daze...
Today is same...
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2005-11-14 14:18:31]
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Re: Rainy Grey Shade
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 02:28:27 PM AEST
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eye catching title and great poem,
It's easy - to want what you will,
'till you have it and you hate it,
this is so true sometimes, amazing write. |
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Re: Rainy Grey Shade
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 05:58:11 PM AEST
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| Not bad, but it gets very repetitive. |
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