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In Love, All Over Again?
Contributed by
His_Infernal_Majesty
on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 12:57:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The dark night in front of me,
a pray of relief.
Your Pretty face that sets me free,
the grief.
Shadows cast, demons rise.
Love grows insides but then dies.
The broken dreams of lost faith,
Slowly regenerate,
When love and death embrace.
Shivering shattering hearts of our old flame.
Like a pheonix reborn again.
Your pretty face sets free,
all these memories,
which forever haunt my past.
forever in pain,
Is this love all over again?
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2005-11-14 12:57:16]
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Re: In Love, All Over Again?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 07:08:51 PM AEST
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I am amazed. Wonderfully emotive and exquisitely crafted.
I love your word choices and this line ..
"Shivering shattering hearts of our old flame"
oh YEAH !! That was brilliant.
~Breezy
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Re: In Love, All Over Again?
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 02:08:18 AM AEST
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This is a little rough around the edges, but you express yourself very well, and your creative wording gives the reader some great visuals! This definitely stirred some emotions in me, which attests to your talent as a writer. Good job. Keep it up!
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