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doesn't work any more
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 03:16:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i gave in last night
but it didnt work
just like usual, it bled
but this time, it didnt hurt
no matter how
i try to feel
i just stay numb
cold and unreal
whats wrong with me,
why cant i feel anymore?
why cant it be like
it was before?
when i could just cut
to block out my soul's pain
and it would help
ease my heart's strain
but now i don't have
a away to escape
from the pain in this world
the misery and hate
now there's only one way
for me to feel free
wrists, meet my knife
make me no longer be
Copyright ©
xXxmegsxXx
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2005-11-14 03:16:17]
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Re: doesn't work any more
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by XxXMcCathyXxX on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 08:47:27 AM AEST
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Very good! i think the title goes with it ^_^. anyway it flows very well and some good rhymes.
Keep writing ^__^!! |
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Re: doesn't work any more
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 04:09:09 PM AEST
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A real thought provoking write packed with alot of deep emotions. The flow and rhyming are good. Keep penning.
*heartfelt hugs for u*
sue |
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Re: doesn't work any more
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 06:15:49 PM AEST
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| There are WAAAAY too many poems about cutting on this site. |
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