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Same Difference
Contributed by
darkkflame
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Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 01:41:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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A skelatal wreck of man, he has become.
A broken soul which is left undone,
One who wished to never had a son.
A mistake never ment to be done.
The use of White Out covers the shame,
with his blood, I have his name.
It's up to me to shoulder the blame,
It's up to me to never be the same.
A mistake never ment to be done
For I wish to never be his son.
Copyright ©
darkkflame
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2005-11-14 01:41:12]
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Re: Same Difference
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by darkkai on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 02:48:15 AM AEST
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| Well I never liked your father anyway, Great poem though. I never thought you had that much hatred towards him but you're not the only one. keep submitting these poems, mi hijo |
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Re: Same Difference
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by XxXMcCathyXxX on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 09:09:17 AM AEST
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Wow! lots of emotion and straight to the point. I'm sorry that you have a father like that.
Keep Writing ^__^ |
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Re: Same Difference
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by mjh0813 on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 09:47:14 AM AEST
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i dont mean to be mean or anything but
at least you have a dad. mine left me.
but i liked your poem. nicely done and im sorry to
meghann |
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