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°°°A Moment in Time°°°
Contributed by
OreO
on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 08:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I met you and held your hand so big and strong
You said that you loved me and sang me a song
You talked of the children you always make laugh
And you said i was pretty right before you left
You wanted us back as you held my mom's hand
But she said no because of your gold wedding band
You already had a wife waiting for you
So she sent you back home, this made me blue
You asked me to come spend the summer with you
I said yes but that i was still going through school
You waited for summer and then called me back
I said yes i am ready but one thing i ask...
I am pregnant with child are you happy for me?
That's when you showed you very true self to me
You sat in silence for a small little while..
And when you finished speaking i no longer smiled..
You then said that i was not welcome with you
You said never speak to you and stay away too
I never did go, i respected your wish
I've obeyed you father, but you i have missed...
I wonder if you ever think of me....
Copyright ©
OreO
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2003-01-22 20:20:00]
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Re: °°°A Moment in Time°°°
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by darkkai on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 08:29:34 PM AEST
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| Beautiful, just beautiful. I wish i knew my father. i know i never will. 'cos that man that i wanted to be my father was the same one that brought my into this world. may he rest in peace. Your friend Kai |
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Re: °°°A Moment in Time°°°
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 08:35:01 PM AEST
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| This is a very emotional write. I hope you can meet up one day with your father to let him know how you feel. I am sure he is watching over you right at this very minute my friend. I enjoy reading your poetry. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: °°°A Moment in Time°°°
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 08:56:38 PM AEST
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| Oh, Oreo, how many tears fall upon my heart as I read these words, remember there is a father in heaven, thanks for sharing such a heart-touching write |
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Re: °°°A Moment in Time°°°
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by spooky on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 09:33:07 PM AEST
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| i know that he loves you,,,as much as,,,,s friend in words,,sooky |
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Re: °°°A Moment in Time°°°
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by Lone_er on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 10:06:26 PM AEST
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Huggs oreo--He doesn't know who or what he is missing I think. Wonderful poem maam.
Russ-aka-Lone_er
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Re: °°°A Moment in Time°°°
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by Panther_1978 on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 10:18:01 PM AEST
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OreO, he will always be able to see you... he's in your heart!!! Great Write
Panther |
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Re: °°°A Moment in Time°°°
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by Lia on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 12:27:58 AM AEST
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| This brings on a lot of emotions..I have always known my father but lost him twice. Nothing can compare to the feeling I get when he tells me he loves me... |
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Re: °°°A Moment in Time°°°
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by venkat on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 12:40:54 AM AEST
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He is truly unlucky..he could never understand
what is going through his daughter's mind. my dearest one!
I know the feelings of a daughter. my tears are swelled up for you.
thats all I can say now. I know you are brave. keep it up -Your Vennie. |
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Re: °°°A Moment in Time°°°
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 12:46:22 AM AEST
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OreO this was so beautiful and so short. It caught me by surprise I was like what no more! :( But I loved this it was so heart rending... How I wish i could write like you.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: °°°A Moment in Time°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 09:38:16 AM AEST
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Oreo,this was short for you! I truly was touched by this,you have a warm heart,So much hurt there as well,I know he thinks of you how could he not,So beautifully done in honor of your dad!
Great peice! Christina |
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Re: °°°A Moment in Time°°°
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 04:04:03 PM AEST
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Your beautiful poem touches me OreO
Chrissie :) |
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Re: °°°A Moment in Time°°°
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 04:43:09 PM AEST
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Very touching poetry,you really write well,
From your heart!
~ Heaven Angel~ |
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Re: °°°A Moment in Time°°°
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by capergirl_23 on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 10:12:52 AM AEST
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Great write!! I could feel your pain in this poem. Very emotional and beautifully written. I hope you have your moment in time to see his face and ask the questions that must linger in your soul. I am sure he still thinks of you plenty. We only live this life once, I hope you get to put this situation to rest before it ends. Did you ever think of sending this poem to him?? He asked you never to speak to him, or see him again. You can still honor his wishes by sending him this. Sometimes we do not understand how our words destroy people., and need to be reminded... You never know, maybe he would love to speak to you again & apoligize, but he has his fears on doing so. Maybe his fear of being rejected is stopping him from doing just that. Sometimes even when we know the other is in the wrong the best thing to do is to confront the situation. Place your fears aside, and lay all your feelings on the table.
I wish you all the best ~ truly love reading your words. You have a great talent!! One that touches my heart!!
~Take care~ |
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