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Love Me Right
Contributed by
tdp
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Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 10:05:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Love me with an honest heart and believe that I can try
I won't ask for more then that, I couldn't look at you and lie.
Hold me close when you close your eyes at night and
be real to who you are
Kiss me because you want to and not because you must
and I will love you endlessly and believe, that I can trust.
I won't ask for more than that,
but, love me with an honest heart and prove to me I'm wrong
because every heart string is pulsating and singing your love song.
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tdp
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2005-11-13 22:05:29]
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Re: Love Me Right
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 10:23:36 PM AEST
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An absolutely romantic write you have here. Words written straight from the heart. A wonderfully written poem that warms the heart. Well done on producing such a beautiful write.
*hugs*
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Re: Love Me Right
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 10:34:04 PM AEST
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Love four-legged creatures, they're more loyal ; )
Naw, I'm just kidding...sort of. A little jaded right now concerning 'love', but hopefully you get more pleasant results. All the best!
This poem was open and honest, and the ending sounds promising. Keep it up.
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Re: Love Me Right
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by The_Callif on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 12:00:20 AM AEST
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i agree with both of the other comments (except for the part about loving 4 legged creatures)
very heartfelt write, especially the last line
keep up the good work
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