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stupid fight
Contributed by
sleepykisser
on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 09:34:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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i'm not mad
at anyone but myself.
i'm crying out to you;
but the language of my insecurites is foreign.
my cries are muffled,
insane dialouge floods my reason.
this pattern's too familiar,
my heart recognizes its pathetic sounds.
you seem sad,
but anger stings your words,
and i know where its all going,
but could this time be the last
you drift away,
as sadness and love fuse in me,
creating sickening self hate.
i feel weak
replaying the vaulted words,
searching for a reason
it all spells me;
as i try to pick up the pieces
in the dimensions of my mind.
i run into your image
although its never lost
and i long for sweet numbness
i wait for sleep,
tears amuse me in bed
its all my fault.
Copyright ©
sleepykisser
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2005-11-13 21:34:11]
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Re: stupid fight
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 10:48:07 PM AEST
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A warm welcome to YPDC. I hope u like it here. This is a great first submission. It's packed with alot of emotion. You've expressed yourself so deeply and so well. Keep penning. I hope to read more from u.
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Re: stupid fight
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by Itsme7 on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 12:14:28 AM AEST
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| immense. I luv it. So touching and deep. I related to your situation. |
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Re: stupid fight
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by XxXMcCathyXxX on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 08:59:17 AM AEST
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Wowie! Very good full of emotion, and you get the point across! I like it
Keep writing ^__^!! |
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Re: stupid fight
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 09:04:07 AM AEST
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a very powerful poem. filled with such emotion. u have a great skill in showing how u feel in words. well done.
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Re: stupid fight
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by zealousnatalie on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 12:58:19 PM AEST
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I love the moods of this writing. Self loathing, guilt, sadness, confusion- amazement that your love, once sweet, became the very thing you hate, the thing that lingers...This is very well expressed, and I honestly hope that you write more for my eyes and mind to feast on!
ZN |
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