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My reality
Contributed by
wordsy
on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 06:11:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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As I stand aside this person
I thought I use to be
And caught a glimpse
Of who I am
And what it is to be
And there I saw the madness
That dwells here deep with in
To find that I’m no different
From that what I pretend
So here now falls the sadness
For which that I must bear
To find what’s left of myself
That is if I would dare
To face the truth of all I am
And what I want to be
To finally know if this face I show
Is my reality
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wordsy
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Re: My reality
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by Itsme7 on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 06:21:21 PM AEST
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| If we do not question and analize ourselves we do not grow. I liked this writing. |
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Re: My reality
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 06:24:19 PM AEST
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| effective poem as every relates to it, we always question at sometime or another what we are and what we want to be. Unfortunatly often to find we haven't achieved are dreams |
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Re: My reality
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by Mild_Tempest on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 07:27:54 PM AEST
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| Stunning, I have a second personality, my true one. But everyone see's my fake personality. I'm not sure if it's healthy, but i'll keep it up. :) Great write |
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Re: My reality
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 08:13:58 PM AEST
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OH my yes !! This was profoundly absorbing.
"To finally know if this face I show
Is my reality"
...don't we just all ask ourselves the same question every
now and again? Wonderful write. Brilliantly thought provoking.
~Breezy
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Re: My reality
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by purplestary on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 09:00:47 PM AEST
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| brilliant!!!! i love this..it's so true and everyone can relate....and like all the other comments i can't help but say it.....yes, indeed we do all question who we are..and who we want to be...some question it more then others...but we all do..awsome writing!!! |
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Re: My reality
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 10:30:55 PM AEST
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A real thought provoking write you have here. I can relate to ur poem so well.
To face the truth of all I am
And what I want to be
To finally know if this face I show
Is my reality
A deep and very well detailed poem. Thanks so much for sharing it.
*hugs*
sue |
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