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Gone Forever
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 03:37:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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You were here with us
And then you’re on the bus
The bus that took you away
So we won’t see you another day
You are gone, gone forever
You were a striver and a fighter
And now you are no longer here
You left us to live alone in fear
You were loved so much
And you had the perfect touch
Got me to laugh when I was young
Taught me how to have a little fun
Our Veteran gone on Veteran’s day
The day was not spent in a fun way
You were ours and you are now gone
Always and forever, you are gone
Copyright ©
sprinter27
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2005-11-13 15:37:20]
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Re: Gone Forever
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by brew on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 07:49:42 PM AEST
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A very nice dedication for someone, who seemed very special in your life.! We ALL have had, that or still do.!
I like it when ppl take the time to actually get to know ppl, and see they are really neat, because we ALL have something special about, us.!
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Re: Gone Forever
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 08:49:32 PM AEST
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It's always tough to lose someone who influenced you in such a positive way...They always seem to be the ones we get robbed of too soon too. Nice dedication Sprints...I'm sure he'd be proud of how you turned out as a young adult : )
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Re: Gone Forever
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 09:40:57 PM AEST
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| i loved it although it was sad. Its always tough to lose someone close to you and that made you laugh...i think its good that you wrote a poem about it. Awesome job by the way! ^ ^ keep it up! |
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